Final Assessment

Dear Ophir,

I enjoyed reading your work very much. Your new ending was good. Your questions were great. You definately need to improve your grammar and spelling so I would suggest writing your assignments (next time) in a WORD document, use spell and grammar check and then copy-paste into the BLOG. You made a great effort and of course I was happy to read that you enjoyed this type of work.

Your final grade is 92.

Yours,

Karen Noll Stanger

Reflection

First of all I realy like the book, the plot was intersting and i like the Characters.

I like this way to do a book report, it esier from the regular way.

This way of learning make me to understand the book better then first reading I had to be more in deatails and I understood more the Characters and the plot.

I think we should continue this way because it's split the work to a lot of small assignments and in the end it gives the full picture.

yours,

Ophir.

The Ending

A different end:

When Mitchie and Caitlyn accused in the crime they were very angry. they knew that Tess hided the bracelet on purpose that they can't participate at the Final Jam. Brown said that they are can't be at the camp activits until the end of Final Jam.

Mitchie and Caitlyn talked and thought that is not fair that Tess did that so she can win at thr Final Jam. An idea pop up in Mitchie's mind!, she said "Caitlyn if we can't be at the Final Jam let mess up on Tess's performance!" Catlyn said "O.K, Let's do it".

At the Final Jam, when Tess got on the stage she started to sing. In the middle of the song her voice changed to a horrible voice that Mitchie and Caitlyn created. All the crowd laughed. Tess fell on the stage and the run away and started to cry. Mitchie and Caitlyn were happy that they tought her a lesson to don't mess with them.

After all the singers sang Brown said tha the judges need to choose who will be the winner and suddenly there were a starge voices, Brown said "excuse me for a minute" and got off the stage. He saw Mitchie and she said "You said until the end of Final Jam so..." Brown said "I hoped you to understand". And then Mitchie sang the same song that Shane heared her singing and joined to her in the middle of the song.

In the end Peggy won at the Final Jam!. Tess apologized to Mitchie and Caitlyn and Peggy and for everyone she hurts and everybody sang a song together.

Enter the book

I will pack the following things:

* 10 T-shirts.

* 10 pants.

* My Cellphone so I could call my parents and my friends.

* My Ipod so I could listen to music.

* Swumwear so I could get into the lake.

* Leptop so I could write to my friends and my parents.

* A book.

The Setting

The story is taking place in America, USA, one of the biggest states.

The all story is in a camp that canpers come to learn music. The camp is in the nature next to a beautiful lake.

In the camp there is a wood huts that the campers lives in, dining room, there are special rooms for teaching dancing and playing and singing, stage next to the lake.

There is a kitchen that Connie cooks meals and Mitchie helps her.

In Mitchie's room there is four bads, lots of beatiful pictures, windows that have a view to the camp, lots of beautiful flowers, Mitchie, Lola, Peggy and Tess's personal stuffs, closet, drawer cabinet.

In the kitchen.

In the singing hole.

Questions

If you realy read the story you would know this Questions answers:

1.What is Mitchie's dream?

2.What is the name of Shanes's band?

3.Who are the members of Shane's band?

4.who is Mitchie's mom?

5.What is Mitchie's mom jos?

6.Who is Shane's uncle?

7.Who is Barron's best friend?

8.What is Peggy's real name?

9.Who is the camp owner?

10.Who is Mitchie's best friend?

11.Who is Tess's mom?

12.Who are tess's background singers?

13.Who is winning at the Final Jam?

14.Why do Mitchie and Caitlyn are not allowed to compete at the Final Jam?

15.How does catering service called?

16.Why did Mitchie lie about her mother's job?

diary

I chose to write Shane Gray's diary.

Dear diary,

Today I came to camp rock becuse my uncle made me.

In the camp I teach dance class but today I skipped the class.

today I heared a wonderful voice.

now I am loking for the girl with the voice.

lots of girls heared about this rummer that Im loking for the girl and they came to audition but there was no succeses.

I realy want to meet her and sing with her.

Dear Diary,

Today I met a nice girl. Her name is Mitchie.

She is beautiful and adorable and very nice!.

I wrote a song and sing it to her and she is appreciate it.

We went to the lake and took a boat and sailed, It was very hard and I don't think we done it well. Hahaha it was very funny.

I am going to sleep now so bye bye.

Dear Diary,

Today I found out how is the girl with the voice!.

At the "Final Jam" a lot of campers sang and competed who is the goodest singer and who is going to sing with me a song.

after the final jam the girl sang the song that I heared her singing and I found out that the girl was Mitchie!.

In the middle of the song I joined her and sing with her.

Now we are boyfriend and girlfriend.

I am very happy that I find her.

I'm going to sleep so..Bye!..